Feedback

(date from when I gave you feedback last week)

I met my new teacher this week, we discussed my coursework and she have the following feedback:
-Learn more about conventions
-Come up with 10 bucket list ideas
-Three new endings
-Add more posts to our blog
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Therefore, I will change/do the following things to improve my work:
-                                                        by __________ (date)
-We will change our storyline by improving the ending with our three potential ideas to make our film more interesting.
-Look up bucket list ideas so we have at least 10 ideas
-Revise our genre and short film conventions 
-More blogposts to reach at least 100 posts
-FInish ancillary tasks
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